Essay+Corrections+Legend!

Here are the abbreviations and codes I use when scoring your revised essays. Follow provided links for more information about the topics! [] || [] [] [] || [] [] [] [] [] Olympus High Writer's Guide || [] || Olympus High Writer's Guide || Olympus High Writer's Guide || may be vague, too informal, or otherwise problematic for this kind of writing ||= [] [] [] [] [] [] Olympus High Writer's Guide || [] [] [] [] [] [] || [] || [] [] [] [] [] || (usually a missing or confusing antecendent to a pronoun) ||= [] || [] || [] || [] || [] [] ||
 * ~ CODE ||~ WHAT IT MEANS ||~ LINKS TO LEARN MORE! ||
 * ** TS ** ||= ** topic sentence ** ||= []
 * **TRANS** ||= ** transition ** ||= []
 * **sv** ||= ‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍ **sentence variety** ‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍ ||= []
 * **AWK** ||~ awkward, confusing, or otherwise **not fluent sentence structure** ||= []
 * ** FQ ** ||= ** "floating" quote ** ||= []
 * ** MLA ** ||= MLA **documentation** of quotes ||= []
 * ** DW ** ||~ **"Dead Word"**
 * **PV** ||= ** passive voice ** ||= []
 * ** EXP ** ||= ** expletive ** ||= [[file:olympusbishop/Expletives and Phrasal Verbs.pdf|Expletives and Phrasal Verbs.pdf]]
 * ** CLICHE/PhV ** ||= ** phrasal verb ** ||= [[file:olympusbishop/Expletives and Phrasal Verbs.pdf|Expletives and Phrasal Verbs.pdf]] ||
 * ** WORDY ** ||= **verbosity**, lack of word economy ||= []
 * = **ANT.**  ||~ **antecedent**
 * = ** FRAG ** ||= ** sentence fragment ** ||= []
 * = **R/O**  || ** run-on sentence ** ||= []
 * = ** C/S ** ||~ **comma splice** **(a type of run-on sentence)** ||= []
 * = **II**  ||= ** parallelism ** ||= []
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